Original sentence: I was exhausted
Every adjective had been poured onto me in hopes of a flicker of light but the constant ring in my ears from sleepless nights made “comprehend” into cannot pretend. My skin began to rot as I slouched in front of the same problem for three nights in a row, yet I still nod my head. My body was stuck at sea, drinking salt water as the sun hit me using a metal baseball bat. The thought of another smile and nod was unbearable. I began to rot in my 60 x 60 cm confined space. I accepted defeat as my brain began to melt as I stared at the page coloured in red pen.